My life story is read in poetic stages
I was once weak-minded, now I'm courageous
The cause and effect of a thousand actions
The mathematical breakdown of micro-fractions
It's difficult to fathom the coming of the rapture
What if I awoke in an empty pasture?
Suddenly every ounce of passion had been depleted
And all my determination had been defeated
The rain pours, my tears fall
The pain subsides, I stand in awe
A lightning bolt strikes, I feel a sudden energy
Thunder clouds approach, I can't run from destiny
A tornado tears me down, but I will stand again
My life is a hurricane, but I'll weather it to the end
HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH thanks bro
14 comments:
inspirational.
You should post that in CUA football.
What if I awoke in an empty pasture?
Then you'd be itchy. And you would smell like cow dung.
wow. as a former writer of terrible poetry, this man is my god
here's my e-mail, verbatim, which I wrote in respose to Bro and Adspar:
J.J. loves poetry!!
He loves a glass of scotch.
He loves his good friend, Baxter, here.
Maryland: "Oh yeah??!! Well now THIS is happening!!!"
Thats an awsome poem J.J. And I'm not really a person who really writes or does alot with poetry, thats probably the best i've ever read! It's great. Love ya J.J.!
Oh and for all the fags at Maryland, they need to grow up and not talk crap about people there jealous of!!!!!!!!
Wow. Samantha seems quite literate, she must have went to Duke as well.
(i.e: Oh and for all the fags at Maryland, they need to grow up and not talk crap about people there jealous of!!!!!!!)
Where to start? The proliferation of exclaimation points? No. The fact that one cannot actually talk crap, even though it has become quasi-common day vernacular, I prefer shit-talking. Nah. How about simple contraction. People they are jealous of = People they're jealous of. Samantha, I'm not jealous of your literary wit and savvy. Please continue supporting Duke. Thanks.
J.J. Redick..
My boy can do it all..
Shoot the 3
Write Poetry
and beat UNC!!!!!!
Don't hate the player
HATE THE GAME!
ok well first of all this was a great poem by J.J. Redick. This is one of the best poems that i have ever read and they really make you think. Second, why the hell do you people bad mouthing eachother... well bad mouth eachother? This comment thing was probably made so people could react on the poem not shit-talk (talking crap) who really cares?!?! just comment about the poem and get on with your lives.
This is one of the best poems that i have ever read and they really make you think.
maybe you should read more poetry
damn boy. that is pretty amazing. crazy amazing, in fact.
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U FUCKING SUCK!
OMG GO FUCKING SHOOT URSELF U WILL NEVER B GOOD AT ANYTHING BUT SUCKING DICK U WHITE NIGGER!!!!!!!!
Chill out there, anonymous all caps guy in Oklahoma.
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